Fix writing of 2 points - investigate the relationship between the challenges of implementing smart mobility practices and it's effect on Malaysians

Note: Need to do this in 5 hours from now. Budget Max $10 Just need to fix & extend some writings on point 1.7 and 1.8 On my current writings Our study aims to investigate the relationship between the challenges of implementing smart mobility practices and it's effect on Malaysians I would think Have to write and always think who is the audience (Malaysians) so every point you must show how it benefits them or how they are involved 1.7 - i think needs to be reworded like the questions asks who will it benefit need to answer upon that like Theoretical - smart cities and it's strategy will benefit academicians in future studies to have a better grasp on understanding how users respond to it So something like that 1.8 scoop study Our study aims to investigate the relationship between the challenges of implementing smart mobility practices and it's effect on Malaysians So need to explain our methodology and who is going to response and how we will conduct it -Kindly find attached file of my writings & LR