Hello - I could certainly help with your descriptions! The pages look good, pics are great, the text though reads as someone who wrote it who knows everything there is to know about these bikes. This is great, but when you're selling, you have to be able to step back and get some distance. I know how to create effective and enticing product descriptions. For an adventurous and dynamic product like this, you have to have a little fun ( :
My approach to writing is based upon taking chances as far as being ultra creative and ultimately making a significant impact on that reading moment in a person's life! You have to be smart about how you utilize words and sentences; screen space is a precious commodity not to be wasted. You can actually check out my overall writing style and tone at scribassist.com. Holding a PhD in English, I know that I can create dynamic text for you.
A little on my background...I have spent the past ten years in sales and marketing for a construction/realty company. Additionally, since 2011 I have been working in a freelance/consulting capacity. I've developed website material for a multitude of industries from art, to law, to health care, to name a few. I basically spend my days in front of my computer ensuring that the online strategies I've employed are in fact working. If they don't show results, then I am not doing my job.
I look forward to hearing from you!
Best,
Anne