Good Day!
I am Ruth, writing to you to show my interest in your project. I am an avid anime fan, manga reader, and gamer who has a lot of passion for game writing. I have more than 3 years of professional writing experience in various forms such as blogs, news, game stories, copy writing, essays, scripts, and game guides.
I understand you are looking to have someone to proofread and to provide constructive criticisms on the game you have written so far. Rest assured I have been giving constructive criticisms in the past and also a game writer myself. I'm confident I can provide you feedback with your work. I can also provide writing samples to give you a basis of how I write for games in different genre. These genres include but not limited to fantasy, romance, adventure, action and more. Not to mention, I'm currently working on a fantasy-romance visual novel game dialogue writing. So, with that said, I'm hoping you'd give me a chance to work with you.
That would be all and hope to receive good feedback.
Thank you and have a nice day!