I would like the below paragraphs rewritten. I would like it to keep the same meaning as the original text without taking away from the stories that it tells. I need this by tomorrow. Thank you.
I need the following rewritten:
"Although Myrrha’s sin was one of lust, which should situate her in the Second Circle of Hell, she appears in the Eighth Circle of Hell because she concealed her true identity in pursuing that lust, thus committing a sin of fraud. This technicality reveals something about Dante’s technique. The incestuous woman’s punishment implies that one is chastised according to one’s greatest sin; such a rule fails to hold for Dido, however, who committed suicide because of love but was put with the Lustful rather than with the Suicides. Dante is not trying to make a theological point with this seeming incongruity; rather, as a storyteller, he places sinners according to the sin that their respective stories most embody. Potiphar’s wife, for example, is famous for the biblical passage in which she tries to seduce Joseph and then falsely accuses him of trying to seduce her. It is not her lust that makes the story striking but her lie about it; thus, Dante places her with the liars. Though Inferno often proves rigidly exact in following its self-created rules, at other times Dante simply follows his narrative instinct.
The justice of Brutus and Cassius’s placement in the lowest depths of Hell is more problematic. History tells us that these men did betray and murder Julius Caesar, but Caesar’s status as a great benefactor remains disputed. The explanation for their presence lies in Dante’s often-implied belief that Rome is the sovereign city, destined to rule the world both physically and spiritually. Just as Christ, whose church is centered in Rome, was the perfect manifestation of religion, Dante feels that Caesar was the perfect manifestation of secular government, as the emperor of Rome at the height of its power. Since spiritual concerns must, in the end, outweigh temporal ones, Judas has committed the greater sin, and his head, rather than his legs, feels the constant chewing of Lucifer’s teeth. However, the fact that Brutus and Cassius suffer a punishment only slightly less harsh demonstrates Dante’s belief that church and state play equally important roles, each in its own sphere. Throughout Inferno, Dante has expressed the view that church and state should remain separate but equal. Now, Dante finds an arrangement for the final circle of Hell that both completes his vision of the moral hierarchy and makes one last, vivid assertion of his politics."
I have helped many friends edit and review their writing assignments during my undergrad career, and their graduate ones. Helping you edit these two paragraphs on Dante's Inferno should be no problem. I hope to hear from you soon.
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I am Sumari Booso and i am a new freelancer. i can do typing very well. I am Microsoft certified and use MS Office on a daily basic. I have more experience in typing. I can type 40 WPM. I am available at any time to start your work and deliver it in perfect condition as desired.
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Sumari booso
I am a university English professor who is a creative writer, an editor and a professional proofreader. I teach literature subjects,communication subjects and writing courses. I write summaries, articles, abstracts, reviews, speeches, letters, journal entries and some poetry. As a literature instructor, I am familiar with the wealth of imagery and the power of the language of Dante Alighieri's Divine Comedy. I would like to be a part in accomplishing your task of rewriting the two paragraphs on this immortal poem.