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Hello! We are two belgians who are launching their first business.. unfortunately English is not our native language. Therefor we'd like to have a creative mind who's native language is English and is able to rewrite the content of our website. This won't be a single task, we'll need a freelance writer from time to time (upcoming blog posts, new webpages, branding, ...). To make the selection process a bit easier for us, I present you a small writing challenge. Below is a 109-word-example, and I challenge you to improve what we've written: "Is your wanderlust running out of control? No more cool ideas for your next trip? Hire the Bro Scene founders and plan a badass trip together. Whether it’s a romantic city trip or an extremely alcoholic bachelor party. Our goal is to listen to your needs and show you the most epic things you can do in Europe. Unfortunately when planning a trip you also need to fix how to get there and where to sleep. Well, we take care of that too by finding the cheapest flights and best spots in town! Nothing will be booked by us, that is the only thing we leave up to you." Side information: both of us are 25, the website is about travel (hidden gems, travel planning, tips & tricks). We target every traveler in the world between the age of 18-35. Our content should be a hilarious read, while still being informative. I wish you a lot of luck and hopefully we can work together in the near future as many translation requests will be coming shortly!

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@philmakerz

S A M P L E_ A D D E D_ B E L O W_ A S_ P R O M I S E D__________________________________________________________________ Has your wanderlust wandered off? Has your get-up-and-go got up and gone? Have you run out of ideas for cool places to take awesome selfies? Do you hate websites that ask rhetorical questions? If you answered YES to the first three, you’ve come to the right place. The Bro Scene team is here to get your ass in gear and plan your next amazing trip with you. Whether it’s a romantic city trip you’ll remember forever or a wild stag night you’ll probably forget, our goal is to listen to your needs and recommend the most epic things that you can see and do in Europe. One minor detail: when planning a trip like this, you’ll need to find someone to sort out how you’re going to get there and where you’re going to sleep. Never fear! We take care of that as well! We’ll track down the cheapest flights and find you the hottest spots in town. All you have to do is book them, and then you’re good to go! ------ British native editor with over 16 years’ experience. I’ve edited large amounts of copy on different web sites and I'd be happy to polish up your content. I'm also interested in collaborating on future projects. As a full-time freelancer working from home, I can usually find time even at short notice. I'm comfortable with most subjects and I'm no stranger to in-depth research when necessary.

$100 USD in 3 days

5.0

(251 reviews)

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@hopmarketing

Attention all 18-35 year olds who are planning a trip to Europe ... hire the Bro Scene founders to plan a badass trip together, where you will discover hidden gems, local knowledge and tips and tricks to make your travel experience memorable. Whether it’s a romantic city trip or a wild bachelor party, we can accommodate. We listen to you and ensure we exceed your expectations by putting together an itinerary that includes the epic things to do and enjoy in Europe. We take care of everything, including finding the cheapest flights, accommodation options to meet your expectations and budget and the best spots to experience in each town! We do all the research and recommendations, leaving the bookings up to you. Contact the Bro Scene now ... let's do this together and plan your next trip to Europe. You have just found the perfect freelancer for your project. I live in Australia and English is my first and only language. My strengths are accuracy, reliability and attention to detail. I will work to your brief and will aim to exceed your expectations for this project. Recent feedback 15/7/2015: "I have to say: excellent" EXPERIENCE Over 25 years experience working in an advertising and marketing agency SKILLS Proofreading, editing, transcription services, social media managers, layout and design using Adobe Indesign, Microsoft - Word, Excel, PowerPoint and Wordpress RELIABLE Delivering to timelines COMMUNICATION Regularly communicates to ensure project is on track

$250 USD in 3 days

4.9

(30 reviews)

5.2

@swift555

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$130 USD in 2 days

4.9

(7 reviews)

4.7

@csimpson6

Hi Guys, My name is Claire and I am a writer with a lot of experience. I have private clients but I use this job board when I need some extra work. I am a native UK English speaker based in the UK. I have done a rewrite for you, pasting it below: Rewrite. Are you stir crazy for some excitement? Do you want to let rip on an awesome trip but can’t find the time to plan one? No Problem! Hire us now and we’ll plan a badass trip you won’t forget. We are the founders of “Bro Scene” and we know what it takes to put together your “dream team” trip package. We know the most epic stuff to do in Europe and our goal is to tailor a trip to meet your deepest needs! Want to take THAT girl on a romantic city break to show off the city sights? Want to blitz out on an alcohol-fuelled stag do? We know! We can take the headache out of planning by putting together the best and cheapest deals on flights, hotels and entry to the best hangouts in town. All you’ll need to do is choose and book! Let me know. Regards, Claire.

$255 USD in 5 days

4.8

(3 reviews)

4.6

@namitajain68

Is wanderlust rushing full speed into your bloodstream? Is traveling itch making you desperate for a break like no other? Are you finding it a tough task to find the coolest place and the hottest things to do in Europe? If yes, you need to hire Bro Scene to bring you the most badass holiday ideas ever. Romantic city trip for two, or a boozy-woozy bachelor party, or a lone ranger hike into the wilderness, we are ready to listen to your needs and show you the most epic things to enjoy in Europe. However extreme your ideas, we realize that a trip-in-making also needs some planning like how to get there, what to see, and where to eat and sleep. That’s why we also offer to hunt the best and the cheapest airfares, hotels and more. Last but not the least, we are the ideas, information and advice people. Bookings will be your domain totally. -------------------- * ----------------------- Hello, If you like what you read, please revert for further discussion. Regards, Namita Jain

$138 USD in 5 days

4.9

(21 reviews)

4.2

@CockerPhD

Hi there, I've added the modified text below. Look forward to hearing from you. Do you feel like you need an escape, like real soon? Running out of ideas for your next big adventure? Well why not hire the Bro Scene founders and lets plan a badass adventure together? We work with your needs; whether you're planning an exotic, romantic getaway or looking for a party scene where booze is easily accessible for a bachelor party. Our goal is to understand your requirements and plan an epic and memorable trip in Europe. Unfortunately when planning a trip you also need to plan logistics like how to get there and where to sleep, we take care of that too by finding the cheapest flights and best spots in town! We will plan everything for you, present you with the package and all you need to do is book and go!!

$210 USD in 3 days

4.2

(4 reviews)

3.8

@writepal925

bid is for rewriting 30 500-word articles in error-free, fluff-free, plagiarism-free american english. below is my sample rewrite of your 109-word sample. thanks. "Is your wanderlust running out of control? No more cool ideas for your next trip? Hire the Bro Scene founders and plan a badass trip together. Whether it’s a romantic city trip or an extremely alcoholic bachelor party. Our goal is to listen to your needs and show you the most epic things you can do in Europe. Unfortunately when planning a trip you also need to fix how to get there and where to sleep. Well, we take care of that too by finding the cheapest flights and best spots in town! Nothing will be booked by us, that is the only thing we leave up to you." Are you travelling to Europe, but tired and bored of the usual places to visit? Do you want sites and events you’ve never thought of going to before? Here is a solution to fulfill what you desire: Contact the Bro Scene founders, and together you can discover the places and happenings you will be most excited about. Bro Scene can suggest the most romantic trip of your life, or find even the most obscure, exclusive social gathering where only bachelors –and bachelorettes, perhaps—party you would want to attend. Accommodations will be no problem: we’ll find you the least expensive ones in the parts of any town you specify. And the best is, you retain top control on all these: you book yourself into them. Now, isn’t that great?

$111 USD in 10 days

5.0

(2 reviews)

2.8

@marandagomes

See for yourself how I can make your writing better. If you want it to have a humorous tone, it should still sound professional or else no one will trust you with their money. I hold a Bachelor of Business and can be of great help to you in accomplishing your goals for your new travel business. Please refer to the edited copy below. "So you want to take your girl on a romantic getaway to Europe but you don't know a thing about it? You could book a ticket and wander around Europe looking for something exciting to do, but how much do you want to bet she ditches you when all the best restaurants are booked and you have inadvertently reserved a dirty hovel thinking it was a posh hotel offering a discount? Or maybe you and the frat boys want to take Europe by storm? Except you don't know where the best bars are and you don't want to spend the trip sitting in jail for being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Don't ruin your trip before it even begins! Let the Bro Scene boys do the planning for you. We'll find you the most affordable flights and direct you to the best spots in town. All you have to do is book it. Get started today!

$83 USD in 3 days

5.0

(1 review)

2.1

@modamus

Hi there, I am a Canadian proofreader, editor and translator and English is my native language (beware of those who aren't native speakers!! ;). I have read your advertisement closely and feel that I would be a good candidate for the job. I totally get what you are trying to do, and I am a very collaborative worker, willing to work with you to make the best possible content. I have worked on the sample given, and I invite you to take a look: "Is your wanderlust out of control? Out of cool ideas for your next trip? Hire the Bro Scene founders and plan a badass trip together. Whether it’s a romantic city getaway or an extreme drinking bachelor party, our goal is to listen to your needs and show you the most epic things you can do in Europe. Unfortunately, when planning a trip you also need to figure out how to get there and where to sleep. Well, we take care of all that for you by finding the cheapest flights and the best spots in town! But we’ll leave you to make the final decision, we won’t book a thing, we’ll leave that up to you." Feel free to get in touch with me if you have more questions about me or my work. Cheers, Monique

$222 USD in 3 days

5.0

(2 reviews)

1.5

@Annetter

I have over 15 years of marketing experience and currently run my own marketing communications business. I can re-write your web content ensuring it is well written, engaging and relevant to your audience. Please note I have quoted a week to complete this but once I see the site and know how much needs to be re-written I can give you a better indication of time. Please find below the re-written passage you supplied. Ordinarily I would go over this a couple of times prior to submission to fine tune it but hopefully it meets your brief given the time frame. I would be happy to discuss this project with you further. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Have you been struck with the travel bug? Are you looking for exciting places to visit in Europe but have run out of ideas? Look no further than Bro Scene! Bro Scene will work closely with you to plan your next badass adventure. Whether it’s a romantic getaway you’re after or a boozy boys trip, Bro Scene will get it sorted. Based on your requiements, Bro Scene will give you recommendations of where to visit, who has the best airfares and where to stay. All you have to do is make the final decision and bookings. It couldn’t be easier. Call Bro Scene today!

$133 USD in 7 days

3.6

(2 reviews)

2.4

@elvinh1

Dear Sir or Madam, “Words are, of course, the most powerful Weapon used by mankind.” To anyone who's looking, it's clear: necessity for content is increasing. Smart content creator attracts everyone, from the educated, smart generation in a hurry to build their networks, to those who just want to know what's selling best at their local supermarket. Whatever the information is, I try to deliver the best writings. I will give my best to deliver your message as powerful as You demand. I believe that my "message" to our respective readers needs to be understandable and thoughtful. I am experienced content writer with BA degree in English language and literature and two years of experience living in USA, having more than 5 years of writing in various genres. I will provide you SEO optimized, high quality, well researched, blog, articles, web content, product descriptions / reviews and e books within your given deadlines. My work is always copyscape tested before delivering to my client. Your satisfaction is my first priority. With over 5 years experience in writing blogs, editing and proofreading articles, web content, translation,MS Word,Power Point,data entry,English language,teaching,article/ blog writing and content writing , My aim is to bring a modern, but experienced approach to your project. Allow me to partner with you on your efforts and bring your vision to life. I am also familiar with APA, Harvard, Chicago and MLA referencing styles. Best Regards, Elvin

$50 USD in 3 days

5.0

(2 reviews)

1.2

@Vidamor

Good Day, I hope you are well? I have a Diploma in Non-Fiction writing. I have been writing for the past ten years of which my work has been published in newspapers and magazines. Please view my portfolio to see samples and proof of my work. I went to college in the U.K, I am fluent in English and can produce a high standard of work. Here is the writing challenge: Have you lost your sense of wanderlust? Perhaps you are looking for something new and exciting? Whether you are looking for an unforgettable party abroad or a romantic journey for two, we can help you plan it! We will take care of all your arrangements, from how to get there, how to get around when you arrive, and the best places to suit your budget. We do the planning, whilst you do the booking. Let the Bro Scene plan you an epic trip abroad! By choosing me, you will be choosing to have the highest level of work produced, on time, by a professional. Thank you.

$150 USD in 30 days

5.0

(1 review)

0.4

@RimaAllaham

My first language is French I am a native speaker of English I have 30 year editing experience I am detail oriented I am a perfectionist

$155 USD in 3 days

0.0

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0.0

@sascheller

Hey guys! My name is Sergio, and although my profile says I'm Polish, in fact I am bilingual Polish and English writer and translator, having lived in the US and the UK, practically my whole life. I am very excited for your new company - it's sounds like a great venture! I love traveling myself and I will happily help you out with all your linguistical needs. I would be happy to show you additional examples of my work, unfortunately freelancer.com doesn't allow attachments at this stage of communication. My rate is $25 per 1000 words. For that price you pay for the research, writing and editing, as well as my humor, wit, creativity and stylistic flow. I personally commit myself to my projects - something that is very rare among freelancers on this portal. Here's the text you asked for. Hope you like it! Is your wanderlust running low? Feeling like there’s nothing new you could see or do? That’s why we’re here! Hire the Bro Scene and let’s plan a badass trip together. Whether it’s a romantic weekend getaway or a wild and boozy bachelor party, our goal is to help you find and do the most epic things across Europe. Too many times you've had to spend countless hours on researching plane tickets and hotels. We take care of that for you too by finding the cheapest flights and best spots in town! And the best thing is we don’t tell you what to do; We will find and show you the best offers, but whether you book or not - it’s all up to you.

$30 USD in 3 days

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@vayana

Hi, here's a little rewrite of your sample: Are you looking for new horizons to explore, but lack any ideas for your next trip? Bro Scene is here for the rescue! Whether it’s a romantic city trip or a movie-style bachelor party you're after: We'll guide you to all the best spots around Europe and promise you the cheapest flights, best bang for your buck and an epic adventure you'll never forget. You set the boundaries, we'll take care of the rest! Depending on the amount of work you have available, I'm willing to rewrite content and optimize it for SEO purposes for a fixed fee per article. You provide the articles and select the appropriate keywords, I rewrite the article with the correct amount of selected keywords. As you know, content should be engaging for people to read but also interesting for google to index highly. There's plenty of guidelines to follow, and if your site is wordpress based there are even plugins available which will tell you if an article is optimized for google or not. Either way, let me know if you're interested and we'll work something out. Kind regards, Michael

$55 USD in 3 days

0.0

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0.0

@kmpadias

Is your wanderlust running out of control? Out of adventure ideas for your next trip? Contact Bro Scene Founders and let’s plan that next awesome adventure together. Whether it’s a romantic city trip or a completely drunk bachelor party, we are here for you! Our goal is to help you find the most epic things you can do in Europe, and plan the most economical way to make that happen. We will assist you with the lowest price flights to get there and find reasonable priced places to stay so all you worry about is booking the flight we’ve found and reserving the room. We won’t do any of the booking, that’s the only thing we leave up to you!

$155 USD in 3 days

0.0

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@incredibledeshy

Good Day Sir ! I believe that my level of English both in written and spoken makes me a very competitive candidate for this EDITING project. I will do all your editing tasks perfectly and deliver it to you well before the deadline. I am interested in plenty of proofreading, editing and typing tasks (preferably as much as you can give) with good total sum. And given below is the edited version of test required for improving your 109 words sample. "Is your wanderlust running out of control ? Please don't go for any cool ideas on your next trip ! Hire the Bro Scene founders and plan a bad-ass trip with our customized guidance if you are looking for a romantic city trip or an extreme alcoholic bachelor party. Our aim is to serve your needs and show you the most extraordinary things that you can enjoy in Europe. Planning a trip always involves on how to get there and where to stay. Well, for that, we provide special service for our customers by recommending the cheapest flights and hotels around the best spots in town. We assure that we shall do the bookings only after you select and confirm the best available options from our recommended list." Please feel free to get in touch with me should you have any further queries. Thanking you in anticipation. Warm & kinds regards Qamrul Islam

$155 USD in 3 days

0.0

(0 reviews)

0.0

@kingsfield1

A proposal has not yet been provided

$222 USD in 1 day

0.0

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@HoodedCrow

Hi guys! I'm your friendly neighbourhood writer/translator. Your website project sounds like something I would like to use myself, as I love to wander and see the world while not taking myself too seriously. I am currently trying to relocate from France to Hawaii to be reunited with my partner. I've also lived in the United Kingdom for two and a half years, and Quebec has no secrets for me anymore. So, it would be my genuine pleasure to help you in your endeavour. Here is my proposal for edits on your piece. "Is your wanderlust out of control? Maybe you think you've seen it all? The Bro Scene bros can help you plan the most badass trip of your life. Whether you're looking for a romantic city trip or a highly alcoholic bachelor party, our goal is to point you to the most epic fun you can have in Europe. While you take a nice relaxing bubble bath, we will take care of all that nasty planning, from the cheapest flight to the best place to sleep. No worries for you, though, as you always remain in control of the final booking." This is just a rough draft, obviously. I suggested a little more humorous banter and tried to make the last part sound more like an advantage (the not doing the booking part). If my profile suits, feel free to contact me. I am always available and happy to help. Best, Crow

$155 USD in 3 days

0.0

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@laurenambrosepr

Hi Bro Scene My name is Lauren, I am a public relations professional within the property sector. I'm looking to take on some projects in my spare time to keep me busy, which led me to the freelancer website. Your project caught my eye as I enjoy travelling and spent a lot of my childhood in Spain. I have not used this website before so please excuse any uploading errors or faults with my proposal. As requested in your brief, I have amended the text to create the following: "Are you consumed by wanderlust, but not too sure where to go next? Bro Scene have got it covered! From a romantic weekend in Paris to a 'booze fuelled' bachelor party in Amsterdam, Bro Scene's ambition is to turn your European dreams into a reality. Unlike travel agents, we aren't about the money, we just want you to have the trip of a lifetime; so tell us what you are looking for and we will put it all together. Flights, accommodation and the best places around town, we will plan it all, leaving only two things to you: the booking and the epic holiday!" I have also taken a look at your website and seen there are a few grammatical errors in need of changing, though all in all, it is a great website! I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes Lauren

$222 USD in 3 days