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Flyer for Charity

I hope you will like this and I am looking forward for your feedback. Your feedback will help me to make it more appropriate. Thank you very much for being with me.

Contest Entry #4 for                                                 Design a Flyer for a Charity

Public Clarification Board

  • andrewrace24
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    Please remove all the below items from the flyer and replace asking for people to help. We are looking for people to either donate at www.justgiving.com/fearnerace OR to donate a prize for our summer fundraiser raffle

    • 6 years ago
  • andrewrace24
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    this was my message to you - not what is to be wrote

    • 6 years ago
  • andrewrace24
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    £1600

    • 6 years ago
  • andrewrace24
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    This is written in the current tense. ''we'' cuddle and kiss her'' - Fearne died in November - we no longer kiss her. we ''cuddeled and kissed her''

    • 6 years ago
  • andrewrace24
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    gemma said shouldnt be here.
    She is telling the public what happened
    The whole part needs to be written as if gemma was explaining what happened to her

    • 6 years ago
  • andrewrace24
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    this should read like gemma is telling the story - not gemma said...

    • 6 years ago
  • andrewrace24
    Contest Holder
    • 6 years ago

    As

    • 6 years ago

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