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(voice of the elder sister)

Sleeping in between the sheets of time, resting safely, senselessly dreaming through the veil of realities, caressing echoing waves, ripple through the astral sea, all flows through the dreams of the old ones, the wise watchers, the sisters rest, as they always have, surveying what has and will come to pass.

Yet somewhere beyond time and place, an incomprehensible and unseen shroud is forming, enveloping the light of souls it passes. A deep utterance of ancient incantations rumbles in the bones of the weave. In rare fading glints of sightless maddening darkness, a vague shadow of a serpent slithering through the cosmic sea can be seen, enshrouding, and mystifying its path, ushering in what shall be named the age of Capricorn, the dark age. The sisters have begun weaving, a prophecy of those that will be their eyes in the shroud.

Far away in the Nawa desert, an archaeologist Heinrich, an obsessed collector of oddities and magical items, Is wandering the desert. His most prized artifact though, is the broken heart of Koza, an item he has searched for all his life. The item got into possession of Sekhet, a pharaoh that was told to be immortal, but managed to somehow commit suicide. Rumor has it, the item got buried with him.

Heinrich, has gotten old and desperate, and in a last ditch attempt, he has walked into the desert to search for it. This is where the prologue starts.

Heinrich: (in amazement) What beauty hides away here in the desert, what stories echoes in time, within these walls.


(spoken rather embarrassingly) Too bad we didn't bring water for everyone, yet their sacrifice is not in vain.


Otto the servant: It's an honor to be here for u Master Heinrich


Heinrich(slightly angry): Shut up Otto


(They arrive at a huge building)

Heinrich: (eager and intense) Is this the temple of Sekhet? It must be! I can't believe my own eyes, hurry up we need to search for the tomb.


Heinrich: (in amazement) What beauty hides away here in the desert, what stories echoes in time, within these walls.


(they find the Tomb of Sekhet nearby)


Heinrich: Finally, after all these years of digging, we have found it!


(digging sound)

(Otto jumps down)

Heinrich: (almost in tears) All these years of searching, to the brink of madness, I have come here. Who would doubt that this is fate, my destiny, arriving here at the very edge of my lifespan.


Heinrich: (now furious)Give it to me !!


Heinrich: We must take the ship back to Celeste... we must be quick


Otto the servant: Yes master

(heinrich travels to celeste with the artifact)

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