Hi there! First of all, I think your story has a lot of merit, and is fairly similar to a children's book I helped publish!
Otherwise, I am a native English speaker with over 10 years of professional editing and writing experience. I am the lead publisher and managing Director of Sleepy Lion publishing, a traditional publishing company. I have written many published articles and online content, from video games to films, short stories to academic essays. Additionally, I have proofread hundreds of documents, including lengthy books, websites, essays, in-game text and much more, so I have a very advanced grasp of the English language, grammar, and punctuation. I have a keen eye for detail, a strong collaborative spirit, and I am able to deliver quickly with high quality results.
I have also taught English with Creative writing at one of the top UK private schools as well as receiving my BA English with creative writing degree at the top Art University in England, where I specialized in children's fiction. I have also worked at a children's publishing company. I would love the opportunity to talk more and work with you on this project.
If you have any questions, do feel free to get in contact.
Looking forward to hearing back,
Michael