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Text refinement for adventure/fantasy computer game

€30-250 EUR

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Posted about 6 years ago

€30-250 EUR

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We are developing a small adventure-like indie game. We will provide text that appears in the game illustrating progress and communicating mysteries, secrets, and quests etc. to the player of the game. The work would consist of proof-reading (spelling and gammar) and - more importantly - if necessary reformulating words and phrases to fit to a fantasy setting, and improve language use in general. For this we would require an English native speaker ideally with experience in fantasy literature or similar. The amount of work is approximately 7100 words structured in ~80 parts. A typical example would be (spelling errors for illustration): The wizard of the forest appears: Wonderful! You have found the first hint to one of the Great Treasures of Aria. History tells us that during the ages five large treasures have been hidden somewhere in Aria. Hints to these treasures can be found all over the land and some of the beasts have travelled far looking for them. However, there are rumors that the treasures have been cursed by a mighty wizard and are not easily dug up. Once I even read in a old dusty book about the existance of a sixth treasure containing an object of unimaginable value and power. But this could only be a fairy tale... Completion time of the work is relatively flexible and can be discussed (several weeks is fine). Successful applicant will be fully credited in the game. Applications could include example work or references in the fantasy field. If you want, you can send an improved version of the given (above) sample. Although this is not required.
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Hello I am an English native speaker. I am experienced in proofreading and editing of all genres, including sci fi and fantasy. In the past I have edited for Lost Age Productions. My communication skills are excellent. I'd be happy to discuss your project further. Feel free to message me or view my profile and feedback.
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Your project sounds delightful and I have provided below a proofread and rewritten version of the example you provided. I am a native speaker of English and have been copy editing for more than 10 years, with three of these including being on the Freelancer platform, where all my reviews are good ones. This work has included some fantasy stories, though not quite like your adventure game. I am a fan of Terry Pratchett and Ursula Le Guin, and enjoyed stories about magic when I was younger. I read many of the Harry Potter stories to my son, who has played Magic the Gathering and various fantasy role play games, some of which we hosted at our house. Other relevant experience to your project is my membership, for six years, of a children's writing critique group. Congratulations! You have found the first clue to one of the Great Treasures of Aria. History tells us that during past ages, five large treasures were hidden somewhere in Aria. Clues to these treasures can be found all over the land, and some of the beasts have travelled far looking for them. However, there are rumors that the treasures have been cursed by a mighty wizard and are not easily dug up. It has also been told that an old dusty book holds the clue to the existence of a sixth treasure, containing an object of unimaginable value and power. But surely this must be merely a fairy tale...
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Hello there! I see that you need editing and proofreading services for your game illustration text and I am a professional proofreader/editor who can work with you on this project. I possess more than 4 years experience in the field and will ensure that the spelling and gammar of your game text is suitable for your audience. I look forward working with you! Kemar Daley (Professional Copywriter/Editor/Proofreader)
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I've done similar projects for legal papers, academic projects and story books, doing this will be pretty achievable. Share more details with me via chat please and we can immediately get started.
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this is a sample that you give that I make improvement The wizard of the forest appears: Wonderful! You found the first hint to one of the Greatest Treasures of Aria. History told us since ages ago five large treasures have been hidden and haven't discovered somewhere in Aria. Maybe you can look for hints to these treasures through your journey all over the land and be careful some of the beasts have travelled far looking for them. However, there are rumours about the treasures have been cursed by a mighty wizard and are not easily to be found out. I have read in some old dusty book about the existence of a sixth treasure containing an object of unimaginable value and powerful. But this could only be a fairy tale that lost its wings...
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The wicked wizard from the woodlands appears: Clever you are. You have found a clue that will lead you on a journey to unconver one out of five of the Great Treasures of Aria. Relevant Skills and Experience I’m am a poet as well as writing my own novel.
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Hello, I'm a translator with over 5 years of experience in translating, editing and proofreading . Let me know if I can help you with the translation of your documents. In any case, if there's any project I can help you with let me know. Best Regards
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I am a native English-speaker with impeccable grammar, spelling, and vocabulary. I grew up playing games like this, and enjoy reading fantasy books to my kids. I will make your scripts shine. Relevant Skills and Experience I played role-playing games as a kid, have played many computer-based adventure games, and have read a good amount of fantasy literature.
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Hi, I'm an experienced writer for fantasy game projects. Brief sample below, message me for additional samples. Best, Chris SAMPLE Centuries ago, the Ever Bright Order was a beacon of light in the Known Lands. The priests and warriors of the Order scoured the baronies and fiefdoms, rooting out the Chaos that lurked within. The Hierarchs that guided the Order brought the rule of Law to all corners of the Known Lands, and a time of abiding peace blessed the lives of Humans, Dwarves, Halflings and Elves. But their noble victories would eventually come at a steep price, and the triumphs of the Ever Bright Order attracted the notice of dark powers bent on ruin. The deadly race of Shadows, lashed into a fury by their mysterious Shadow Queen and joined by savage Human cultists, hunted the Order throughout the Known Lands, terrorizing and slaying all who dared deploy the sunburst emblem. The Hierarchs marshaled their forces, and battle was joined; the cleansing flames of the Order seared many Shadows and their gibbering lackeys. These mortal enemies, light versus dark, fought one another to a desperate standstill. The Shadows retreated to the inky depths of their murky realm to regroup, while the shattered remnants of the Ever...
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It looks like an excellent project I would love to help! Graduated from Full Sail University in Entertainment Business. I love proofreading and fantasy games so I'd be willing to negotiate any kind of work or any help that I could provide!
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I know a lot of adventure indie games and i write some English fantasy stories. i can send you the improvised version of your work. I am very interested in your project. i f you are not satisfied, please send me a message.
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i am fluent in English. I have experience (played or read) and I am a fan of both fantasy games and books so I understand how the text should sound like.
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Hi. I am a professional Web Content Writer/Editor, which naturally makes me proficient at proofreading as well. I am also a passionate gamer. Hence, after going through your project description, I am confident to get your script proofread properly. Please come on chat for a detailed discussion about your game genre. Regards. P.S. Here is a revised version of your sample text. Brilliant! You have found the first hint to one of the Great Treasures of Aria. History tells us that during the ages, five large treasures have been hidden somewhere in Aria. Clues to these treasures can be found all over the land, and some of the beasts have traveled far looking for them. However, there are rumors that the treasures have been cursed by a mighty wizard and cannot be easily dug up. Once, I even read in an old dusty book about the existence of a sixth treasure containing an object of incredible value and power. But this could only be a fairy tale…
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Hi, I'm very interested in your project. I'm a translator of 4+ years specialized in game related content. I'm also an avid gamer who has played many fantasy games and MMORPGs. Below is my revised version of the sample text. Note that certain terms may not be accurate as I have no knowledge of the style or context of your game. Please feel free to contact me to discuss further. Excellent! You have found the first hint to one of the Great Treasures of Aria. According to the ancient books, there are five Great Treasures hidden in Aria. Hints to these treasures are scattered all over the land, and many have traveled far and wide in search of them. However, as the treasures are rumored to be cursed by the most powerful wizard of the realm, it proved to be a challenge even for the most experienced treasure seekers. I once read in an old, dusty scroll about the existence of a sixth Great Treasure that holds inconceivable power, but this could be a mere fairy tale...
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I am ready to do the job in 2 days tops, having in mind that I have done this thousands of times so far.. Relevant Skills and Experience Punctuality, Good awareness of grammar, punctuation as well as great spelling!
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I have an interest in the fantasy genre, having enjoyed playing Dungeons & Dragons for several years, so I am familiar with the creative process behind similar storylines. It would be a pleasure to work with you.
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Hello, I can proofread your text (7100 words) of your fantasy indie game. I have excellent grammar and punctuation, and I speak native English, can do it in 1/2 weeks, I’m responsible and I’m available immediately. If you have any question, do not hesitate on asking me. Regards, Carlos
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Wonderful! You have found the first piece of mystery mosaic to one of the Great Treasures of Aria. Ancient sources tell us, that over the centuries somewhere in Aria have been hidden five great... Relevant Skills and Experience Experience in writing fairy tales, unfortunately not in english, but sure can deal with it. Responsible and easy-going. Ambitious and more into interest, not into money.
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