Critique sales script for webpage

In Progress Posted Sep 17, 2004 Paid on delivery
In Progress Paid on delivery

I want someone highly skilled in marketing-speak to suggest improvements to my sales script and sales page. My product is an ebook with a natural health theme that will be sold on Clickbank.com. I'm not looking for 'slick' but a sensitive, caring, strong pull on the emotional front (as is all clever marketing I guess), and clear communication. Please show me examples of sales scripts that you have contributed to/edited. Experienced professionals only please. I estimate about 1-2 hours input is required. Additional work is available on a successful outcome to this project.

Copywriting

Project ID: #5873

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12 proposals Remote project Active Sep 20, 2004

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ccase0459

Please check my profile and see PM.

$60 USD in 2 days
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tjo

Hi, I can certainly help out with your sales copy - I am an experienced copy writer/editor and published magazine writer, with a degree in Journalism. Please contact me for sales writing and website copy samples. Thank More

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Sumanta

Hello! I am Sumanta Sanyal. I am new to this site and so have no rating yet. I am authoring an ebook on net marketing - affiliates business. I know a lot about sensitively marketing on the web. I have done sal More

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Biznessguy

Hi karon, check my pm. Rick

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bid1

we can do it.

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sunita12

Hello, I have wide area experience in open source technology like php/c++/linux/so files/fusebox AND WINDOW based ASP,COM,DCOM,MTS,VB,VC++,.NET,Flash Please forward me your mail ID so i can forward you project proposal More

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smarttechwriter

Please see PMB for sample. Regards

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